I think i would title it dream:) or maybe once a upon a witches dream or something:) the story sounds great it looks like it would give the main character a great experience to know a moral:) and the witch idea could come in handy in a sequel;) it sounds great:) only one question how old is the girl by what you have said im guessing around nine or ten just wondering the age of the girl can affect the story all togather etc... the story sounds great hope you complete it not alot of people can see themselves writting a book:) goodluck:)
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